Mesmay's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Crazy Jay's Revenge]

yey, good job

The faces made me lol, a lot.
Btw, search shoop da woop and find the proper sound, thats the only crit I feel it absoloutely necessary.

Nice.

[Another Day in Paradise]

Awesome, kinda.

'Grats on the voice acting. I hate doing voice acting personally because Im british but you seemed to almost use it to an advantage.

Chunkkeh responds:

Awwh I love you too Mesmay <3 British accents are great to use, they just need to be applied in the right way.

[Raffmania: Reload]

'Tis good

Im sure you'll make FP at SP one day :]

Raffi-Stick responds:

That's my life's goal at the monent... 1/2...

[Do not open the closet]

I liked it a lot

It gave me a shock. Lol. Very nice animation, most things were well drawn, your improvement is extemely impressive, although you could add a little more detail here and there.

Good job overall though.

[With My Mind's Madness]

I love your work so much

Its just great how well you bind everything together, all of the music, the backgrounds, the characters...

everything.

[Survivors, City of Death]

That was really fluid =D

I think its very refreshing to see a madness STYLE animation which isnt really tacky, and altogether horrible.

The fighting was very fluid and choreography was well done.
Congrats.

[Shiftlimits:Portal Collab]

Very nice

JarethBlackthorne. If you could be bothered to analyse the style of Xiao Xiao, you'd see that its completely different.
On top of this, why should they be restricted to the limitations portal has?

[- Kaos Fight -]

Hm.

First of all, it'd be nice if i could actually tell which one was which.
Also, it needs more action, more fludity, etc etc.
I really doubt that this deserves a blue name...
=/

Theres potential though.

[Super Mario World Gijinka]

Hmmm

You might find this rating "harsh", but at the end of the day, it wasnt fluid, the backgrounds werent the best, and overall it wasnt brilliant. I applaud you for attempting to put a new twist on the koopalings, lakitu and bowser though, it was inventive.

Just work on the actual animating, because you're on the right track, you just need to work at it.

Also, use a smaller brush size perhaps? Because it just ruins it, really.
Also it wouldve been nice (seeings as you kept actual changing of the drawings very minimal, for there to be a little more use of shading.
As well as this I think you should try some different camera angles and try for more dynamic fight scenes. (Also, try and choreograph the fight instead of just letting it run loose, if you know what I mean).
I know Im not the best animator myself, but I can still tell what needs improvement.
I hope you read this and instead of being insulted, you actually try and improve based on this...

Thanks for reading

[sp hitman]

Nice one leo!

This is really good, especially as you havent actually been doing flash for that long.
I like the fact that after about the first 45 seconds it was all fighting. Almost. But you know what I mean, it was action packed. I just wish you had had more time to finish it instead of putting "to be continued".

Congrats all the same.