Mesmay's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[GhostFight-BOS-Part1]

Fantastic!

Quite simply, it was amazing.
Outstanding job.

[Flash Intermediate Tut]

Well...

This is intermediate?
This looks more like a beginner tutorial to me.
Oh well, it still looked like a nice tutorial and you explained everything well.
Animation wasnt that good though, and you could've elaborated a bit more.

[Y.A. Crazy Stick Fight!]

It was ok

I like stick anims, but this was nothing to new or interesting ( why i gave it a 2)
the sticks were too short and fat for any complex movements, and physics were weird.

Although I commend you for making it as long as it was.

[The Obstacle Course]

I going to be honest

It wasnt very good.
It was quite choppy. Add more frames inbetween.
Effects were bad. Try with some better colours, and instead of doing electricit randomly, make sure that it follows the exact pattern that you want it to.
Backgrounds could have been better.
The preloader wasnt very good at all. A normal one wouldve been fine, but it looked like you'd stoled it and really messed with it.

Sorry, but this doesnt deserve a "great score".

And Im not just saying this because I hate sticks. Im a stick animator too.